Chapter Fifteen is the fifteenth chapter in My Immortal.
Author's notes[]
AN: stup flaming ok! btw u suk frum no on evry tim sum1 flams me im gona slit muh ristsz! fangz 2 raven 4 hlpein!
Plot[]
Ebony cries and runs away from Draco. She runs to her room, despite the two of them having already been in her room, slits her wrists, and drinks the blood. Soon after, she glances at her GC watch and realizes it's time for her Advanced Biology class. Her work consists of turning a black pentagram into a guitar; the guitar then turns into Draco.
The guitar-Draco declares his love for Ebony and sings to her in front of the class. Ebony is touched by this, and the two begin to make out. It appears that Loopin may teach Advanced Biology, as he shouts at them for kissing in class, but is stopped by the rest of the students, who admire the duo's relationship.
Ebony and Draco then leave for the MCR concert in Hogsmede after Ebony sees a poster announcing it.
Inconsistencies and divergences from canon[]
- Biology isn't a class at Hogwarts.
- The class we see looks more like Transfiguration, which in canon was taught by McGonagall. Lupin never taught this class, only Defense Against the Dark Arts.
- Lupin only taught Defense Against the Dark Arts for one year.
- Lupin was supposedly being sent to St. Mango's, so shouldn't be teaching anyway.
Notable quotes[]
- “Ebony Ebony!” shouted Draco sadly. “No, please, come back!” But I was too mad. “Whatever! Now u can go anh have sex with Vampire!”
- I was turning a bloody pentagram into a black guitar. Suddenly the guitar turned to Draco!
- “Enoby I love you!” he shouted sadly. “I dnot care what those fucker preps and posers fink. Ur da most beautiful girl in the world. Before I met you I used to want to commit suicide all the time. Now I just wanna fucking be with you. I fucking love you!.”
- Then I saw a poster saying that MCR would have a concert in Hogsmede right then. We looked at each other all shocked and then we went 2gether.