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Chapter Six is the sixth chapter of My Immortal. It features the first appearance of Harry Potter, whose name is now "Vampire".

Author's note[]

AN: shjt up prepz ok! PS I wnot update ubtil u give me goood revows!

Plot[]

Ebony wakes up the next day, gets dressed, and goes to the Great Hall where she has a breakfast of "Count Chocula cereal with blood instead of milk, and a glass of red blood".

As she eats, a boy bumps into her, causing her blood to spill all over her, and making her cry out "BASTARD!", which she quickly regrets as she sees the boy who bumped into her is an attractive goth boy. He introduces himself as Vampire, although his name used to be Harry Potter. He recounts that he changed his name because he likes the taste of human blood. Ebony begins to introduce herself as a real vampire, but is then taken away by Draco, who says "he had a surprise" for her.

Inconsistencies and divergences from canon[]

  • Hogwarts does not provide Muggle brand cereals such as Count Chocula for breakfast. Even if they did, Count Chocula is not sold in the UK, where Hogwarts is set, so it would be very unlikely to have it for breakfast there, with or without blood.
  • Harry Potter displayed no particular fascination with vampires in any books, and certainly would never change his name to "Vampire". Also, he never tasted human blood at any point, other than his own after getting wounded or injured.
  • If Ebony and Vampire are in the same year, it seems odd that she would only be meeting him for the first time now, especially considering how well known Harry is in the Wizarding World.
  • Vampire goes from "grumbling" to "giggling" to "whimpering" in the span of one conversation. While Harry did sometimes sulk in canon, he was never this mercurial.

Notable quotes[]

  • He was so sexy that my body went all hot when I saw him kind of like an erection only I’m a girl so I didn’t get one you sicko.
  • “Because I love the taste of human blood.” he giggled.
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