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Chapter Twenty is the twentieth chapter of My Immortal. It is infamous for featuring a scene of Loopin "doin it" with "Snake" in a hallway and a cameo by Dobby.


Ebony gets dressed in anticipation of the MCR concert in Hogsmeade. She has earlier been alerted that Draco has a surprise for her, and wonders what it will be.

Loopin arrives at her room and asks for "condemns". Ebony mocks him, as he is a pedo. He calls her a "fuker" and leaves.

When Ebony exits her room, she discovers "Snake" and Loopin "doin' it" in the hallway, with Dobby watching. Ebony takes a video of them, and readily admits that she intends to blackmail them with it. They chase her, but she throws her "wound" at them and they trip over it.

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Vampire Potter shows up, looking "extremely fucking hot", and says that Draco refuses to go to the MCR concert. Ebony agrees to go with him instead. They take the flying car that Serious Blak gave to Vampire; the plates say MCR666 on the front and ENOBY on the back. At the concert, Ebony and Vampire make out and mosh to the music. Then Ebony sees Draco, "cryin in a corner".

Author's Notes[]

AN: I sed I dnoty ker wut u fink! stof pflamin ok prepz!1 fangz 2 raven 4 da help!1 oh yah btw ill be un vacation in transilvania 4 da nex 3 dayz so dnot expect updatz.

Deviations and Contradictions to Canon[]

  • Just like Draco's flying car, there is no reason for Harry or Sirius to have an illegally modified Muggle object.
  • Electronics don't work on Hogwarts, so Ebony's camera - assuming it was a muggle invention - would not have been able to function.


  • “No, actshelly (geddit, hell) kan I plz burrow sum condemns.” he growld angrily.
  • Den I gasped...Snake and Loopin were in da middle of da empty hall, doin it, and Dobby was watching!1
  • I started to run. They chased me but I threw my wound at them and dey tripped over it.
  • "You dimwit!." Snake began 2 shoot angrily.