Continuations of My Immortal by fans.
Continuation One[]
From comments in Chapters 33-44.
man I wish there was a proper ending. but I tried my best to write a chapter 45 in Tara's 'style'...
AN: omfs u stupid dum preps nd pozers!!!!111 dis is da last chapta so stop flamin me az i sed b4 i donot give a fok wat u fink!!!!111 2 all u kewl goffik ppl out der fangs u guys rock!!!!!!11111 dethly halos is gong 2 be so goffik i kant wait 2 reed it! after dis i may rite a twilite fanfic bekos edward culin is so hawt!!!!11666 fangs 4 all da help raven lets rite more fanfiks 2getha!
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"nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111111111111" scremed volsenort in a relly preppy way. mi spel had hit him in da face and he was storting 2 elaborate. snap nd loopine wer cryin preppy teerz but no1 gav a fok abot dem bekos they were preps and pedos.
"enoby u did it!!!!!" willow scremed with sad joy in her goffik red eyes and her even more goffik hearts.
"is dis really da end of volldenoty?" professor slughorn asked profesor sinistra goffikally.
"yes i saw it in mi tara cards!!!!!111" trevolry sed her voice booming all ova da grate hall lik she was singing in an evonezence corset.
"enoby!!!!!11! thou art a moronic moron foollish idiot!" voldemort yelled as he was fading away forever. "1 day i will cum back 2 hogwarts!!!!!111 then i shall kill thou and all ur friends forever!!! until den, snape and loopin will share da video of u all over da skull! hahahahaha!" den he disappeared in a puff of poofy pink preppy glittery smoke and i started to cry teerz of really cool goffik blood.
"enovy u wer fuckin grate!" dirco saed so happi at me as he hugged me so roamntically lik in twilite which we both were gong 2 see later. "but y r u cring?"
"ITS SO FUCKING UNFARE! I WANTED 2 MAK HIM GOFFIK IN DA FUTURE BUT HE WENT BACK 2 BEAN A PREP ALL ALUNG!!!!" i screeched with mi voice so loud kinda like when amy lee sings bring mii 2 life. darco whipped all of mi teerz away (like in da song dis fic is named after! if u dont know da song den get da fok out ur a prep!).
"loopin we can still do dis!" Snape grumbled angrily as he got up.
"not so fast fucker!" vampir said as he used crucifix curse on him. willow took out her red MCR knife and stabbed loopin in da heart onze nd 4 all. (raven u fucking rock bitch!!!11 lets go 2 hot topik tomorrow ok?!) navel destroyed da camera so no 1 wood ever see da video of me doing it with draco on it.
"well done enoby drakness dimension raven way!" dumeldore shooted wisely. "now that voldemort is dead forever we dont need da mystery of magick here! im gong to tell cornelia fuck that he and rumbridge can go fock demselves! they will never send any1 here to azerkabaijan again1"
i was still cring but felt happi bekos everyfing had finally worked out grate. voldemort waz finally ded and da mystery would never try 2 get in our way agen, and der was gong 2 be another MCR concert soon!!!!111 but b4 dat we had a huge party later dat nite. only da kewl goffs were allowed 2 cum der, so it waz me, willow, vampir, draco, darkness, fred, gorge, navel, b'lody marie, slutborn and sinister. I waz werring a goffik black and red corset outfit fingy just like da one amy lee wears in da video for going under while draco was drezzed like gerard way in his video for helena. every1 was having a greate time except for Britney that fucking prep who was going to be expelled bekos she helped da death dealers get out of St Mangolia.
we all gave her da middle finger as she was taken away from scool forever, and all da preps were 2 scared to cum 2 dat party so i was fucking excited. crab nd goyle played a looong gothic playlist of mcr, gc, evanesconce, grenday, linkin pork, blink 184, him, coon is wat we aim 4, nd slipknot. den me, Draco, Vampire, B'loody Mary and Diablos decided 2 play sum music from da album we were working on.
"omfs enoby dis is our last yeer of school!" willow sed to me as i got out my gothic black leather guitar dat had red pentagrams all over it. "r u going 2 go on tour after we gradu8?"
"HELL YEAH" i sed den da red lites kame on. "were gong 2 play at da mcr consert as well! how abot i get u gerard ways autogreaf?"
"OMFS I LUV U GURL FANGS!" she screeemed suicidally as she hugged me. den we played ur first song, and we soounded great, every1 was moshing 2 us. now Bloody Gothic Rose 666 would bekom super famous bekos i had killed da dark lordi and every1 wood bi (Geddit theyr bi) our records. professor sinister was dancin so goffikly, wearing a long black ripped dress with red devils dacning all ova it, black long boots with pentagramz all over then, and loong goffik fishnet leather glove fings.
"enoby we kan finally hvae dat groop cutting sesszzion!!!" she sed. i gasped. i fot she was still dirnking volximortserum but instead she was dirnking vampir blood. now she wood be kured of her addikshun!!!!11
i still felt bad about Satan not being arond anymore. i preyed in mi goffik hart 2 satan that i wood never bekom an evil preppy guy like he did. i played mi guitar sexily and every1 screemed at me. dat nite me and darco did it agen in da forbidden forest and we revelled in our evil depressing dark misery forever.
DA END
FUCK U PREPS! GOFFS U ROK, RAVEN LUV U AGEN!
Continuation Two[]
From comments on Chapters 33-44
Note 1: Someone else wrote a continuation of chapter 45 if you scroll down (up) a little. it's more accurate to the narrative so definitely go check it out before this.
Note 2: Ok so I needed closure so I wrote a redeeming re-write of chapter 44. Thought I'd share here (but mods (if there are any) feel free to remove it cuz it's a little too long lol)
Note 3 (last note I promise) : Ok so Voldemort has revealed he was in fact Gerard Way all along and Ebony's lost all hope becuz of that. The following events happen after this scene : “Think again you fucking muggle poser!!!!!1” Harry yelled and then he and Diablo and Navel both took out blak guns! But Voldimort took out his own one.
But I could vaguely hear someone calling out my name. It was a familiar voice… comforting, almost angelic. My senses slowly regaining, I realized that it was Professor Sinister but something was not right. Her long dead black hair was shorter, silkier, and tied into a neat ponytail, and her eyes were a common brown now that the red contacts were gone. She gave me a warm sad smile, and sang, ‘Enoby… No, Ebony. Ebony, listen. Do you know who you are?’
The song from that preppy movie Moana – I was shocked. I didn’t know what to think. Not only was she no longer wearing all black, she was no longer a goth. Who was she? Who even am I? I looked over at Harry, Dia- no, Ron, and Neville fighting with all their might for me – for the wizarding world. But Voldemort had the upper hand, and shot an emerald green spell that hit Neville squarely on the chest. He fell to the ground before I could scream a warning. Neville, no.
‘Accio,’ cried Voldemort triumelephantly, and Neville’s wand went soaring through the dining tables into his hand. His snake-like features curved to form a sick evil smile. ‘It is all over now. Now, Ebony, sit back and enjoy the show. Witness the end of everyone you love.’
I looked around desperately for Dumbledore. Surely, Dumbledore of all people would be able to put a stop to this. I lost what shred of hope I had left when I saw the half-moon spectacles shattered beyond repair lying beside the figure of an old man who was spread-eagled on the carpet. Then, my knees gave way. Or had someone forced me down? It did not matter. ‘I’ve got the girl, my Lord.’ Nothing mattered anymore.
But then, I heard a whisper. ‘Save us, Ebony.’ Dumbledore was still alive. ‘You are the only one who can.’ Me? What can I do? I’m just a stupid Mary Sue without any real talent who didn’t even realize when her favorite singer was actually the Dork Lord. My world was shattering before me and I could do nothing to save it. No more.
The Great Hall rang with Voldemort’s obnoxious laughter, as he shattered the enchanted ceiling and through it, in came thunder and lightning. It was like a natural disaster. No more.
‘Who am I?’ Professor Sinister launched at Snape, and I could finally get up. Voldemort stopped laughing. ‘I am the gothic girl who loves MCR and GC. I am the girl who likes to shop at Hot Topic and wear all black. And most importantly,’ I said, looking at the tired faces of everyone who had come to save me, without whom I would not be here today, and for whom I had to make one last stance, before saying, ‘Most importantly, I am the girl who wants more than anything to go back to the common room and slit my wrists with my friends while we watch Shark Attack 3 and Saw 2, and to do it with Draco at least one last time, but that’s all over now. It will never be the same again, because of you, Riddle.’ He laughed cruelly.
‘Not to worry, Ebony. You will soon be joining Neville and your precious friends when I-’
‘No more,’ I interrupted him. It took all my strength as I took my wand and cut my hair to shoulder length and dyed it bright pink. ‘Who am I? I do not have long ebony black hair but my name is still Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way. And I had the time of my life being a goth, but now I understand that I have something more important to protect.’ My eyes filled with tears as I held my wand high against Voldemort’s shocked face, and cried, ‘Thank you for the good time, Gerad. So long and goodnight.’ He realized what I was about to do, and raised Neville's wand. He was too fast. 'Face it, you're never gonna make it,' a voice inside my head sneered but I smiled. I don't wanna make it. I just wanna-
‘AVADA KEDAVRA,’ I shooted.
Continuation Three[]
From comments on Chapters 33-44
I know a few people have shared their continuation of ch45 so here’s one generated by AI:
“ABRA KEDABRA!!!!!!!!!!!11111” I shooted.
The picture of Hogwarts was all zapped into a hole and we walked out with the fake wasp trap.
After this stupid bit of stupidity we all know I must have got caught by a guard because I never saw a guard. But we found ourselves in a mahogany library with 4 desks all in a row and 2 statues of book worms sitting on them. But they are all zapped into a hole. 2 be honest we thought evony so we don’t know if they is as screwed as we is!
“We should run!” Fred screamed excitedly. “But where to!?”
“Uh?”
“Ummmm, go to where the exits are.” I said, deciding to be sensible after 2 heaping all of dumpley’s life into my own.
“Well, there’s 2 be a door on da side of da book worms.” Navel groaned.
“That’s more like it!!!!!11”
“It’s locked.” Bane said.
“Well, I have magic wand!” said Voldemort. “AND AN OPF ZAPPIA RITUAL GROVE!”
“NOOOOO!!!11” I screamed but then I remembered there is a basement and 4 years ago I made it. I looked down at the floor and realized that there is a hole in it. I just dove into it. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!11”
“I do not have dem big black boots anymore??????”
“I hope he dies” a blasted voice cried out.
“DID EVERYBODY GET DE-TRAPPED?”
“DAD CAN YOU SEND U MOM?”
“I GOT EM PENS!!!11”
“DO U HEAR FISH CRAPING???”
“DAD DO 2 GET U 2O OR.”
“EXCUSE ME BITCH!??????” He blasted me out of the basement.
“Evony!” Dumbledark screamed, “I got dem on da stairs!!!!!11”
“HARRY!” I shouted.
“YOU BITCH!!111”
I crawled over to him and he had his arm around me, I was crying and shoving tears up my face.
“What the hell is a BITCH?” He said through gritted teeth.
“It’s a useless woman,” I said, “A WRITER.”
“YOU?! What was that.?????????????”
“I said BITCH,” I sobbed.
“Well, we’re in the basement of a library in “Hogwarts”!1!!!!111!!!!”
“It’s only one floor” I said, trying to hold my tears back.
“1, the windows down there are VERY CLEAR!!!11!!”
“All that we got out are our hands and legs.” I said. “This is going to hurt.”
“HARRY! HELP US!1!” I heard Bane yell.
“Who?”
“HARRY HELP US NOW!1”
“Why me?” I asked, almost laughing.
“Because I’m an OPF HERO!!1!!!11” he screamed. “Sorry!”
“You sorry BITCH.”
I took out my wand and then opened the door. It fell on a bookworm who squealed.
“Damn wand” I thought. “Next time I will use this.”
We walked down the stairs and saw Navel and Bane, they had the Muggle penises but I would’t let them use it, too many guts and bones on it.
“Here’s ur magic wand Dumbledark.” Bane said as he took out his bag.
“Thanks!”
“Wait a second!” Navel yelled.
“NO THANKS!”
“YOU CAN’T BE SERIOUS!”
“We are!” Fred and Navel said.
I looked at them and they looked back at me with expressions of bewilderment.
“Really? You really want to wear these things?”
“HOLY S**T!”
“What’s wrong?” I asked.
“You did it!”
“The what?”
“You have a magic wand,” Fred repeated, “Dumbledark, that is really really nice!”
“That’s not nice!”
“WHAT??” I yelled.
“You’re too big,” Fred explained, “I knew you were going to be really really smart but not too smart.”
“Why’d you put the damn hat on me?”
“I didn’t” Bane replied, “Everyone else had to and I wasn’t going to let you get beat up.”
“Then why didn’t you take it off me.”
“What?”
“My hat.” I said, sniffling.
“My hat is yours.”
“The hat is yours?”
“No, my magic wand is yours.”
“Oh, I get it. You forgot.”
“IT WAS ON YOUR HAND!”
“My hat is yours.”
I began to walk away and took the hat out of the bag. Bane put it on my head and then placed his hand on my shoulder.
“Welcome to the dark side.” he said.
I put it back on and walked towards the Common Room.
We arrived and walked through the doors to find the others still in there.
“Wow! That’s cool!” Draco shouted.
“Damn that is a great hat!” Bill shouted.
Personally, I think that’s a pretty solid ending. I just thought itd be right to share this masterpiece w the world.
Continuation Four[]
From comments on Britney
The almost unbearable pain from Ebony's Cruciatus curse lifted almost as soon as it had begun. When Britney looked up, she could see that Ebony was simply giving her the finger, bold as you please. It was at that point, that Britney fully excepted something that was nagging the back of her mind. This downright evil Slytherin girl was more or less killing Hogwarts from the inside out with her brain dead actions. She had made You Know Who come right into the school grounds, been attempting and torcher to kill all who opposed her, and had absolutely no acceptance for other peoples interests. It was now, that Brittney descended that she needed to do something about it.
"Hey!" Britney shouted. "Question. Why did you start hating me in the first place?"
"Becase your a stupd pr3p" Ebony said in her distinct bad grammar sounding tone.
"What is with you and your stupid prep vs goth thing?" Britney retaliated. "Haven't you ever heard of things called opinions? We can all have different tastes you know."
Even with Britney being nice enough to give Ebony one last chance, the "gothic" Slytherin snapped, "Shut t F up b*#h or I will kill you." Ebony did not wait for Britney to stop talking. She put her hand in her robes and took out a long black gun, aimed for Britney's head.
Getting up on her feet at once, Britney pulled her wand out and cried, "Expaliamus!" . The gun flew out of Ebony's hand at once. With another wave of Britney's wand, it had turned to ash.
With Mary sue like ability's, Ebony took out another, smaller gun from her robes, but Britney quickly preformed a shield charm, protecting her from the gun fire.
"This is it." Britney thought as bullets rained on her shield charm . "I only have one chance to take her down, and save the school from becoming a gothic wasteland with this vampire girl as the queen."
Waving her wand in the shape of a cross, Britney roared "AVADA KADAVRA!" A jet of dazzling, cross shaped green light flooded the hall. It flew faster than a snitch and struck directly into Ebony's chest.
The gothic Mary Sue fell with a thud, lifeless and still. Britney, her job now done, sat down to catch her breath. She know that she would likely be sent to Azkaban for using an unforgivable curse, but she also knew that the Goth vs Prep, Gryffindor vs Slytherin days, were over. She may have killed the infamous Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way, but if she hadn't, Britney knew that dozens more would have died because they had never heard a song by My Chomical Romance.
Continuation Five[]
From comments on Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way.
Ebony dark'ness dementia raven way,The Empress of goffkind, often referred to by Her faithful as the "God-Empress" the "Master of Goffkind," or simply "the Empress," is the immortal Perpetual and psyker who serves as the reigning monarch of the Imperium of Man, and is described by the Imperial Ecclesiarchy and the Imperial Cult as the Father, Guardian and God of Humanity.
The Chaos Gods and the daemons of the Warp refer to Him as "the Anathema" for He is the greatest embodiment of universal order in the galaxy today and the most potent foe of Chaos in existence. He was, and remains, the most powerful Human psyker to have ever been born.
She has sat immobile, Her body slowly crumbling, within the Golden Throne of Slytherin for over 10,000 standard years. Although once a living vampire, Her shattered, decaying body can no longer support life, and it is kept intact only by the cybernetic mechanisms of the Black throne and a potent mind itself sustained by the daily sacrifice of thousands of lives.
The empress chose to sacrifice His immortal life at the end of the Horus Heresy in the service and protection of Mankind. To countless trillions of goffs across the galaxy-spanning Imperium, She is nothing less than Goddess.Through Her Imperium, all Goffs are united and remain one of the most powerful factions in Hogwarts as well as its most dominant in terms of both population and territory held.
United under one government, Mankind is able to survive the myriad deadly threats it faces from Preps, the forces of Voldemort and the posers, Flamers and christians that lie within the Imperium's boundaries.
The Imperium's rule, carried on in the Empresses name since the end of the Horus Heresy by the High Lords of Hogwarts and a multitude of Imperial organisations, has been long, oppressive and necessarily harsh.
It has also resulted in technological and cultural stagnation, and a regression into tyranny, superstition and religious obfuscation and intolerance that would have horrorified the Empress.
Though She is no longer responsive to external stimuli, the Empress still lies at the very heart of Slytherin’s continued existence. Although She cannot be directly involved in the day-to-day running of Slytherins galactic government, Her existence on the Golden Throne is vital to sustaining the Imperium, since Her powerful mind's presence in the Immaterium maintains and directs the Astronomican, the psychic beacon that makes possible faster-than-light Warp travel and is vital to Imperial shipping, transportation, commerce and communication.
However, the maintenance of this beacon requires the aid of other psykers, whose lifeforces are slowly drained away by the Empress to power the beacon. One thousand psykers a day give their lives to maintain the empress's psychic strength.
She is said to still guide Her race through the psychically-reactive divination tool known as the empress's Tarot, which select psykers can consult to gain a glimpse of the future and the empress's will. She is also said to constantly battle voldemort in the Forest and prevent his further attempts to get her to shoot vampire potter.
Her mind must remain vigilant at all times throughout the entire Imperium to safeguard the Goffs and to offer Her protection to the faithful. Above all else, it is Mankind's collective belief in the empress's divinity that serves as its greatest protection from Voldemort and the other hideous dangers that plague hogwarts. As the Imperial Creed has taught for over 10,000 standard years, the empress protects...
Continuation Six[]
AN: Hi every1 im bak!!111 Guez what? Justin and I gut married lol ok and Raven marrried shamik 2 I v nut bean on da interent bcuz it steels ur sool lol butt I wanted 2 finnish muh stury Guezz what? I saw da last moovies n now I no how to mak dis better ok. Also Apperently lotsa preps hav been makin fun of my srtory U all Suck!!!1111 I h8 u! But fangz 2 da goffik ppl hu mad da wiki. Raven fangz gurl 4 helpin wif dis chapta u rok! MCR still rox!11111
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“Noooooo!11111” screemed Voldemort as da spell hit him. He fell down and died evily.
Cornelion an Rumbigde came. “Omg Voldemont!” Fug exclamated.
“Enony u killed him!11116666!11 all my friends yoiled.
“Guss what!11” Snap injected preppily. He did a spel. Then...He turned i2 voldemarv!11
“OMFG! “ I sed tepidly. “SNAP WAS ROLLY VOLDIMOT!111”
“WHAT THE BEEP IS GONG ON!11111” Rumbread expelled. “ENONY WAE U NEED 2 DEEFEET HIM!”
Volfemort grabbed nevil’s wing. “Avadra Kedada Vampir P0tter!11”
Nooo!!” Everyone else screemed. Voldmort potter died.
“HOW DARE YOU!11” Willow screemd. “U killed him!11”
“Thou must all submitest 2 da bark Load!! Voldemont exhaled”
I was SO F-ing mad! I jumped on2 Volfemort an strated 2 suck his blod. “Noooo!!” he screemd.
Voldemort fell down his dead body full of dead deadness.
“U did it Enoby!” Dumblydum explained happili. “U defeeted volemord!”
But I didnt care. Vampire was dead! But he had been so smexy! I was so constipated!111
I ran up 2 my room 2slip my rots.
I put on a black dress with black pentagrass on it. Da words mcr gc an evincence were on it. I had on TONs of white eyeliner and blavk eyemakeup. I had red lipstick and an Gerard Way shirf. I looked just like Amy Lee.
Drivo came. He was wearing a bloody goff Simple Plan T-Shrig and goff black pants. “Enoby” He weeped devastatingly. “I luv u. “
ME 2 Draco. I said.
Then we dif it goffikly 2 sum Gc an Mcr.
Da end!111
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Evr1 hu flamed SUX!11 Btw I herd da podcast an U guys suck! Ur da reason i left Austrlia 2 go 2 back 2 dubya. Fangz agen raven gurl u rok lol.
Continuation Seven[]
Also AI generated.
Chapter 45: The Powah of Frendship
As da m00nlight glistered thru da shatted windows of Hogwarts, Ebony and her frends found themselves in da midst of a feirce battel against da forzes of evil. Da air was thik with tenshun, and da echoes of spells bein cast reverberated thru da dark corridors.
Ebony, dressed in her signachur goffik attire, stood tall wif her wand in hand, ready to face her ultimate nemesis, Voldemart. Beside her, Draco, Ron, Harry, and Hermione prepared for da final showdown, their determinashun shinin in their eyes.
"Stay cloze, evry1," Ebony said, her voice steady despite da kaos around them. "We can do dis 2getha."
The group nodded in agreement, their bond stronga than eva b4. They had been thru so much 2getha, and now it was time to put an end to da reign of darknes that had plagued their lives 4 far too long.
Voldemart emerged from da shadoes, his cold, red eyes fixed on Ebony. "Ah, da infamous Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way," he sneered. "I must admit, u hav been quite da thorn in my side."
Ebony's grip on her wand tightend, her resolve unyieldin. "U may hav brought darknes into my life, but I hav learn3d da powah of frendship and luv. And dat is sumthin u will neva understand."
Wif a flick of her wrist, Ebony sent a powahful spell towards Voldemart, who swiftly countered it wif his own dark magic. Da battel raged on, spells collidin in dazzlin displays of light and darknes.
Draco, Ron, Harry, and Hermione fought alongside Ebony, their combin3d strength provin to be formidabul. They moved as 1, their movem3nts synchronized, their minds connected. They had become a force 2 be reckond wif.
As da battel reached its climax, Ebony could see da exhaustion in her frends' eyes. They had given evrythin they had, but Voldemart seemed relentless. She knew they needed sumthin moar, sumthin dat would tip da scales in their favor.
Closin her eyes, Ebony tapped into da deep well of her emot1ons. She thot of all da luv she had 4 her frends, all da memories they had shared, and all da moments dat had brought them 2getha. Drawin upon this energy, she channeled it into a spell unlike any oth3r.
A brilliant light erupted from Ebony, enveloping her frends and fillin them wif a renewed sense of strength. Their wounds began 2 heal, and their spirits soared. 2getha, they unleashed a final assault on Voldemart, their combin3d spells overwhelmin him.
Wif a scream of defeat, Voldemart was vanquished, his dark presence dissipatin into nothin3ss. Da battel was won, and Hogwarts was safe once moar.
Ebony collapsed 2 her knees, her body drained from da intense magic she had conjured. But as she looked up and saw da smilin faces of her frends, she knew it had all been worth it.
"We did it," Draco said, his voice filled wif awe.
Ebony nodded, a sense of peace washin over her. "Yes, we did. And we couldn't hav done it wifout each oth3r."
In dat moment, they knew dat their frendship was unbreakabul. They had faced da darkest of times 2getha and emerged stronga than eva. They had learned da tru powah of frendship and luv, and nothin could eva take dat away from them.
As they made their way back 2 da Great Hall, where da rest of da students were waitin, Ebony couldn't help but smil3. Da future may still hold challenges, but wif her frends by her side, she knew they could face anythin.
2getha, they would continue 2 defy da odds and create a world fill3d wif luv, acceptans, and da powah of frendship.
Continuation Eight[]
By Bloody Gothic Wrists, on Fanfiction.net, who claims to be Tara.
My Immortal: The Bloody Gothic Rose of my Heart
AN: Hi everyone. I'm Tara, or bloodyrists666. I've not been able to access that account since 2009, and after all this time, I decided I might as well go ahead and set up a new account. I never wanted to leave My Immortal on a cliffhanger, but things kept getting in the way. But, 17 years later, Raven and I were talking about it again and decided we might as well finish it. Whether or not you believe me is up to you, I can't exactly go back to the old account to prove it anymore. Anyway, here it is, the final part of the fic. If you flame, you're still a fucking prep or poser.
Draco Malfoy was walking down a brightly lit corridor, the polar opposite of his dark, sorrowful stage persona. His hair dyed black, he was with an old friend, who he had been working with for quite some time. A lot had changed since his days at Hogwarts, but he still was loyal to the gothic friends that bonded over their love of MCR, GC, Slipknot, Evanescence, and other bands. "Oh my fucking Satan, Diabolo is looking so hot!" The gothic girl said, gazing at the man ahead. He walked into his dressing room, shutting the black metal door that had red vampire blood all over it. "Let's get ready then. See you in an hour, okay?" Willow was wearing a gothic black leather dress with a huge slit and hot pink tulle, with a red pentagram on the back and the front. She also had red fishnets, black high leather heels, a Satan ring on her finger, red skull earrings, and a purple pentagram necklace. She looked exactly like Sharon den Adel. The evil ring of demonic cruelty was new, from her wedding to Diabolo. She had loved him ever since that MCR concert that had been overtaken by Voldemort and the Death Dealers, their first date. "Yeah, see you later." Draco said, giving her Death's Touch Sign. She left suicidally to her room, leaving him all alone in his depressing sorrow and evilness. He was now in his dressing room, gazing at the black guitar lying against the equally dark wall. Posters of his favourite bands were everywhere, rather aged after all of this time, but still recognisable. Smiling at the MCR poster, he went to the makeup table, where he had his Hot Topic eyeliner and nail polish. Today, his band Bloody Gothic Rose 666 would be playing in Hogsmeade. After finishing at Hogwarts, he and the band finally went professional, having released many successful albums and gathering huge fame. Haunting, dark melodies echoed throughout their venues every single night, each time followed by thunderous applause. Of course, the fucking preps hated their style, but Draco and the others didn't care. Besides, with Britney incarcerated, none of them posed any sort of threat. It was when he saw the framed photograph on the table that his smile faded. There he was, as a seventeen year old, wearing a baggy black MCR t-shirt. Next to him was the girl that he had never managed to forget. Her ebony black hair with purple streaks and red tips that reached her mid-back. Her icy blue eyes like limpid tears. Her uncanny resemblance to Amy Lee. And her black leather corset, the one she had gotten for free from the Hot Topic in Hogsmeade for giving Britney, that fucking prep, the middle finger. "Ebony...you were the most beautiful girl in the whole damn world." Before he met her, he was depressed and suicidal. But then he saw her gothic beauty, the malevolent aura surrounding her. Every single day, she wore a new outfit, clad in darkest black. These garments were of course accented with blood-red. He was so in love with her, he began acting different. One day, he saw her in the Great Hall with her best friend Willow, and asked her out to the upcoming Good Charlotte concert in Hogsmeade. "Oh. My. Fucking. GOD!" she had cried out then. Next to MCR, GC was Ebony and Draco's favourite band. The time leading up to the concert was an agonising wait, but it finally came. And so, they went to the show, in the black Mercedes Benz he had enchanted to fly that night. His father Lucian had a similar vehicle, and so gave Draco his curse (Get it, instead of blessing, because I'm gothic) to have one of his own. Even now, he could remember every single event of that night. Draco getting jealous of Ebony's attraction to Joel Madden. The GC concert tees. And of course, doing it for the first time in the Forbidden Forest, only for Dumbledore to encounter them. Already suffering from a massive headache, he was incredibly furious to catch them having sex in such a dark and dangerous place. Why the Headmaster was there to begin with, Draco still never understood. Being with Ebony was never dull. Sometimes, she and Draco fought, or were forced apart, but they always found some way to get back together. Even though he had been in love with Harry Potter, now Vampire, his heart was now only focused on Ebony. She was truly a bewitching beauty, with countless people, goths or preps, falling for her. Vampire himself fought with Draco over her, and Snaketail had fallen madly in love with her before she stabbed him in the heart. After being forced to do it with Snape, and Ebony encountering them in the act, he thought he'd lost her forever. She had gone straight to slit her wrists with a stake, after all, and being a vampire, she could have died. Instead, she vanished, going to the past once more. In the confusion, he ran away, escaping the irate Willow's wrath. And it was only much later, when he was crying alone with slit wrists in the Great Hall, that Ebony found him again. Shortly after that, though, everything went to hell. Her plan to seduce the young Voldemort, or 'Satan', had failed. For the young man she brought into the present was actually the present villain all along. His power was immense, and he was poised to kill all present there. Even Dumbledore wasn't able to counter his evil sorcery. And so, he pleaded for the gothic girl to save them all. That was when Ebony, after a long moment, took out her wand, and cast her spell. Just as she cast her magic, Voldemort cast his, and their spells collided. The vivid green flash blinded Draco and everyone else there. Just at that second, Professor Sinister ran in, having seen a vision in her black crystal ball and her black tarot cards. But it was too late for her to warn her favourite student. Once the light cleared, the Dark Lord was completely gone. Yet, Ebony was nowhere to be seen either. Just as Sinister had predicted, both would disappear to get rid of each other. Draco screamed in horro, telling her to fuck off, and began to run out of the Great Hall, ignoring the calls of Vampire and the others. He searched all over for her. Yet, no matter which rooms he tried, she was not there. All that was left were her belongings, specifically the vast wardrobe of clothes she had acquired as a goth. People searched for her for days, but she was never seen again. Yet Draco and the others refused to think of Ebony as dead. They never stopped believing she would return someday, and they'd all cry tears of blood like before, and of course, watch their favourite movies, including Shark Attack 3, The Ring 2, and Underworld. Despite all the time that had passed, the goths would never let go of Ebony. She was the most gothic of them all. Even though their original lead singer was gone, the other members of Bloody Gothic Rose 666 wanted to keep performing, yet lacked a lead singer. And so, Willow eagerly joined them. She had been great friends with Ebony, a minor schism over an MCR sweater and a poster aside, and wanted to honor her memory. The other members were Draco, Vampire, Diabolo, B'loody Mary, and Dracola. Hargrid had once been a member, but after the downfall of Voldemort, he was finally sent to Saint Mangos and had remained there with Snap, Loopin and Britney ever since. Thus, they asked Dracola to join, who agreed. Britney, that fucking prep, Draco thought to himself angrily, as he put on his black eyeliner. She had once stolen Vampire's heart before he became gothic, and Draco had never forgiven her for that. He had a feeling she still had pink slutty clothes and looked exactly like Hilary fucking Duff. But yet she had survived, and Ebony was still gone. As he went to put on his black nail polish – with red pentagrams, of course – he noticed the bag from Tom Rid that had been provided for him. The gothic shopkeeper in Hogsmeade, he had been hired to provide outfits for Bloody Gothic Rose 666, and for Draco, he had given him a black leather jacket with a bloody gothic rose on the front, and 666 on the back. Baggy blank pants and leather boots completed the look. Recently, Tom Rid had began dating Professor Sinister, Ebony and Draco's favourite teacher. They were currently on vacation in Transilvania, getting to explore the imposing, foreboding castle where the classic Dracula movie had been filmed. Without Draco and the others, Hogwarts was full of preps, according to the half-Japanese, half-vampire teacher. But there were still goths, ones who idolised the legacy Ebony left behind. Her iconic style was constantly being recreated, to varying levels of success. Some of these were indeed posers, but many of the real goths were among them too. Yet no one could ever be as gothic as Ebony. Not even Draco himself. "Hey motherfucker, let's go!" Vampire's voice said angstily from behind the door. "Don't be late like a prep!" "Okay bastard," Draco said in a gothic voice, kind of like Gerard Way during the comeback tour last year. (AN: Raven and I went to see it obviously, it was fucking amazing, Gerard I love you so much forever) He quickly got into the Tom Rid clothes, grabbed his guitar, and left the room. There, the other band members were waiting in deadly gloom. Vampire was wearing a black shirt with the band's emblem on it, black leather pants, and shoes with red metal pointy spikes all over them. He also had white foundation and black eyeliner and lipstick on. Diabolo was wearing a black tuxedo with dark blue leather pants, to match his black hair with blue streaks. B'loody Mary was wearing a black leather shirt that was ripped to show off her black leather bra, a black leather skirt with 'Satan' written on it in blood red letters, six pairs of red and purple pentagram earrings, and a belt with screaming tortured demonic faces all over it. Navel was wearing a ripped black baggy t-shirt with MCR lyrics all over it, black leather pants with pictures of Billy Joe Armstrong all over them, and black leather shoes with Simple Plan album covers all over them. Willow had changed into a gothic black minidress that was all ripped, a spiky red belt, black combat boots, purple fishnets on her legs and arms, and a black choker. "Oh my fucking god! You all look fucking kawaii!" Willow screamed gothically. "Thanks bitch, you do too." B'loody Mary Smith said energetically, as she lethargically finished putting on her black lipstick. She looked just like Emily the Strange. "Hey Diabolo, thanks for changing my scar back into a pentagram again." Vampire roared, putting away his bottle of human blood. He looked just like Joel Madden. "It looks so cool and gothic tonight." "So, we're going to sing that new song tonight, yeah?" Navel asked sexily, in a voice like Ville Volo. "Yeah." Draco said sadly. It was one he had written himself. The one thing he thought might help heal his gothic tormented heart. "We're going to sing Ebony." "...Let's go then, you fuckers." Diabolo said with his black and blue hair. Draco and the others walked onto the stage, and the crowd went wild at the sight. What seemed like thousands of goths were in attendance tonight, each one screaming and crying. Not a single prep in sight, much to the relief of the band. And so, they grabbed their instruments, and went through their set list. Draco had taken over the guitar, while Willow sang. Diabolo played the bass, Vampire was on the drums, B'loody Mary played keyboard, and Dracola was also on vocals. The night went on really well, and all the goths were having a great time. When he was performing with his gothic friends, Draco was on top of the world. It distracted him from thinking about her again. Yet, tonight, he would be singing the song he dedicated to her. "Before he begin our next song..." Draco began saying to the audience, all of whom had black hair with various colours of streaks and tips. "This is dedicated to our old lead singer, who defeated the preppy Voldemort and the Death Dealers all those years ago. Everyone, this is for..." It was just then that Draco saw someone at the back of the audience. That face, her hair, her clothes. It was as if time itself stood still as his eyes met hers. As if it was that same day when it had been snowing and raining at the same time, and there was no sun. Before long, she began shoving her way through the crowd, shocked by her sudden appearance. It was when she jumped on stage, in front of her old friends, that he knew for sure it was her. "Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way!" For the first time in so long, they kissed. Everyone cheered and clapped, as once again, Ebony and Draco were the only true ones for each other. The End